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Re: but anatomy can be tranquil too
Alright, part two! This is a surprising turn for me, as you alluded to in your reply to my review of the previous poem! Going back to that I see ...
May 30 -
Re: Fire
Happy Review Day! So then, let's get into it. There are some nice choices here. I like how you illustrated the difference between the positive and negative stanzas through the ...
May 30 -
Re: What does it mean to be Asian?
I like this poem, it clearly came from a deeply personal place. I'm not going to do a very in depth critique about the themes or anything because I feel ...
Apr 22 -
Re: 7 Minutes Left -- 6:00|Part 1
First Impressions Less happens in this part than the climactic part I reviewed before or really any of the parts before it seems, but this must be an important memory ...
Apr 21 -
Re: 7 Minutes Left -- 7:00|Part 4
First Impressions The climax to minute 7! While I haven't reviewed the previous parts, rest assured I have read them! Let's get into it. Quite the reveal! I was thinking ...
Apr 21 -
Re: Penance Unto Me, For Me
Hi there! Let's get on with a critique of this poem, shall we? I like the complicated but reprehensible character you portray here. The emotions are all mostly relatable, and ...
Apr 20 -
Re: WoS Chapter 1 Part 1: Zoe
Well, you were kind enough to do two reviews of my work today, so I better at least do my second review of your work of all time. Sweating smile ...
Apr 17 -
Re: David Foster Wallace Keeps His Head
Oh snap! Now I have to finish Infinite Jest to review this! No, I doubt that's necessary. I just wanted to call back to my comment on your Napoleon Dynamite ...
Apr 10 -
Re: “The Fog”
Alright, let's jump right into this wild piece! I love how you suddenly crash the reader head on into this smorgasbord of judgmental description of all these characters from the ...
Apr 10 -
Re: World of Souls - Prologue
Alright, it's finally time to dig into one of Tikaya's frighteningly long fanfictions. (Novels that are posted as a million short chapters at a rate of ten chapters a day ...
Apr 4 -
Re: The Hunt for the Delawackus
Hello hello! Sorry it took me so long to get to this! I had a lovely half-complete review going but it seems to have disappeared somehow after loading from autosave ...
Mar 29 -
Re: Z-9826
This has been in the Green Room much too long for what a great poem it is, so let’s fix that. Wow, I like the formatting here a lot . ...
Mar 25 -
Re: Suicide
Time to try reviewing something other than poetry, now that I drained the Green Room of 0 review poems. Goodness, this is quite the heavy piece. First off I’d highly ...
Mar 24 -
Re: Your blood and greed (ambition of the mind)
Ooh I like this. Love a poem that describes the universal human condition in such unflinching terms. Love a good bit of free verse that isn’t afraid to expound at ...
Mar 22 -
Re: 🪻🌨️ They all had to watch 🌨️🪻
Oh hey there! It’s the last poem/lyric from the green room that I have to get to from before today that has zero reviews! So, I put this one off ...
Mar 22
