Aet Lindling

Hi there! Thanks for the English translation. This is a spooky story! You have a lot of dialogue here that can get a little confusing because there are no dialogue ...

I saw this before when you first posted it but I failed to try reading it aloud then. What a treat! Your meter is more than competent in most places. ...

Hi there! I see this is an SCP-inspired piece, nice! I love Sawyer’s initials at the end, how you snuck in a sly little homage to your inspiration for this ...

First the suggestions/nitpicks, then the answers for the questions! Let’s go! The two were covering each other’s weak points in a way that spoke of years of collaboration. I’m pretty ...

As you suggested I will just answer the questions for this chapter, except I also nitpick some things because I can’t resist. behind the older, heavy-set boy should be behind ...

Alright, part two! This is a surprising turn for me, as you alluded to in your reply to my review of the previous poem! Going back to that I see ...

Happy Review Day! So then, let's get into it. There are some nice choices here. I like how you illustrated the difference between the positive and negative stanzas through the ...

I like this poem, it clearly came from a deeply personal place. I'm not going to do a very in depth critique about the themes or anything because I feel ...

First Impressions Less happens in this part than the climactic part I reviewed before or really any of the parts before it seems, but this must be an important memory ...

First Impressions The climax to minute 7! While I haven't reviewed the previous parts, rest assured I have read them! Let's get into it. Quite the reveal! I was thinking ...

Hi there! Let's get on with a critique of this poem, shall we? I like the complicated but reprehensible character you portray here. The emotions are all mostly relatable, and ...

Well, you were kind enough to do two reviews of my work today, so I better at least do my second review of your work of all time. Sweating smile ...

Oh snap! Now I have to finish Infinite Jest to review this! No, I doubt that's necessary. I just wanted to call back to my comment on your Napoleon Dynamite ...

Alright, let's jump right into this wild piece! I love how you suddenly crash the reader head on into this smorgasbord of judgmental description of all these characters from the ...

Alright, it's finally time to dig into one of Tikaya's frighteningly long fanfictions. (Novels that are posted as a million short chapters at a rate of ten chapters a day ...